[REVIEW] Unfortunate Elements of My Anatomy – by Hailey Piper


Published by The Seventh Terrace / Available May 2021

Verdict: 4.5 out of 5

Rating: 4.5 out of 5.


Overview: Unfortunate Elements of My Anatomy isHailey Piper’s debut collection, featuring eighteen stories. Though most of these shorts have appeared elsewhere, two are brand new. The closing entry is also a never-before-published novelette. If you don’t get around much with anthologies (there are many in the horror community, to be fair) or fiction-hosting magazines, then chances are all of this material will be fresh for you (as it was for me)!

The Good: Let’s briefly cover my favorite entries:

  • “Feast for Small Pieces” is poetic and gruesome, bringing to mind Sara Tantlinger.
  • “The Law of Conservation of Death” has a haunting concept that travels through the ages – “…when you’ve begun to claw at your skin – how can he touch you if there’s no skin? – they accuse you of madness…” was probably my favorite line of this collection.
  • “Candyland” is weird and creepy. I would love to explore this world further, as it made my guts twist and my mind curious.
  • “Aggressive Mimicry” is a sad story about a heart being pulled apart. I was a bit crushed when Omar reveals why he’s brought Miguel to the pond.
  • “Crones in Their Larval State” has a great premise. This short feels like the opening scene to a novel I would like to see Piper write.
  • “Hairy Jack” is a cool and intriguing blend of science-fiction and witchcraft.
  • “We All Scream” was really odd and unnerving.
  • “The Burning of the Blueberries” was interesting and fantastical, yet played almost quietly.
  • “Recitation of the First Feeding” is an emotional, thought-provoking, twisted, and wonderfully entertaining novelette.

The Bad: There are a few stories I didn’t like for one reason or another. I also felt like some of the witch stories should have been spread apart some; they felt back-to-back.

The Takeaway: Unfortunate Elements of My Anatomy is poignant, terrifying, and darkly creative! This hefty collection proves Piper’s talent with ease, solidifying her as a rising giant in the horror community.


File Under: Short Stories, Story Collections, Horror, Fantasy, Sci-Fi Horror, Speculative Fiction, Queer Fiction

Also See: The Worm and His Kings The Possession of Natalie Glasgow Benny Rose, the Cannibal King

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